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Drunken and Drowning by ~cottonpatch:iconcottonpatch:



Drunken and Drowning

Lost words
Unspoken phrases
Stuttering speech
Unheard whispers
Jumbled thoughts

Veins of rage
Blood of terror
Soul of pain

Quickening pulse
Red hot cheeks
Stinging tears
Pure fury
Verging insanity
Sane?
Sense

Amber liquid
Bloodshot eyes
Sickening sounds
Non-existing existence
Lifeless life

Wishful dreams
Dying passion
Play with love
Numb feelings

Irriversable past
Closed doors
Locked locks
Race through mazes
Untangling knots

Shaky hands
Trembling lips
Quivering pout
Uncontrollable body
See through eyes
Unreliable people

Good friends
Trust in yourself
Hidden beauty
Unmistakably gorgeous
Afraid to bloom
Bitter grudges

Unable to breath
Slow and steady
©2009 ~cottonpatch
:iconcottonpatch:

Author's Comments

Just a thought process I had, thining of my childhood and how everyone around me made me feel when they were drunk..again. I wrote this one back in 2001 and of course revised it a little.

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:icongrimsbloody:
I love it. It's like a sequence.

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I think that is the perfect ingredient for this disaster.
:iconkit-darling:
I think it sounds a lot deeper when you read it fast. Then you get a whole bunch of weird pictures in your head.

Of course, when I read it a second time, I got the impression of someone who doesn't realize their own talents.

That's pretty cool. This was your coolest piece!

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We rode on floats bigger than Macy’s
With balloons blotting out the light of the sun.
A parade bigger than that of Barack’s
With more elephants than a circus tent could hold.

-By me

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